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Title: My first attempt at satire...
Post by: ferrarimanf355 on August 06, 2007, 10:10:17 AM

I had this idea poking around my head for a week, and I put it up in my blog last night.
http://ferrarimanf355.1up.com/do/blogEntry?bId=8307059&publicUserId=5524352
It's my first attempt at a satire, so any critiques would be nice.  :-*

Title: Re: My first attempt at satire...
Post by: Madrun Badrun on August 06, 2007, 04:54:21 PM

I thought satires should have a sense of subtleness.

Title: Re: My first attempt at satire...
Post by: TVC15 on August 06, 2007, 04:56:25 PM

That was more awful than The Turner Diaries.

Title: Re: My first attempt at satire...
Post by: Van Cruncheon on August 06, 2007, 04:58:14 PM

the best part is when he puts SATIRE in the title -- it's like he's satirizing satires! that was what he intended, right?

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:gloomy

Title: Re: My first attempt at satire...
Post by: Himu on August 06, 2007, 04:58:21 PM

isn't one of the points of being a satire not telling your audience it's a satire?

Title: Re: My first attempt at satire...
Post by: Robo on August 06, 2007, 05:00:54 PM

As if it really needed to be suggested, you should dig around on The Onion (http://www.theonion.com) until you wrap your head around how editorial satire should work.

Title: Re: My first attempt at satire...
Post by: Smooth Groove on August 06, 2007, 05:19:36 PM

It was really good.  Did you study English Literature at Harvard? 

Title: Re: My first attempt at satire...
Post by: Madrun Badrun on August 06, 2007, 05:20:40 PM

Quote from: Smooth Groove on August 06, 2007, 05:19:36 PM

It was really good.  Did you study English Literature at Harvard? 

:lol :lol :lol
now that I found funny. 

Title: Re: My first attempt at satire...
Post by: TakingBackSunday on August 06, 2007, 05:47:40 PM

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