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General => The Superdeep Borehole => Topic started by: TVC15 on December 08, 2007, 02:25:29 PM

Title: Phoenix Dark, I have just begun working on your story/screenplay
Post by: TVC15 on December 08, 2007, 02:25:29 PM
This one is a doozie.  The working title, as of right now, is:

Maurice's Rainbow, or An Uncompromising Vision of What It Means to Be a Black Man in the Future of America, Year of Our Lord 2009, Under the Reign of Ron Paul, Rex Mundi, Rex Mundi

I am spittin' HOT FIYAH.  It is a NEAR FUTURE UTOPIA OR DYSTOPIA (depending on how racist or Texan you are).
Title: Re: Phoenix Dark, I have just begun working on your story/screenplay
Post by: Van Cruncheon on December 08, 2007, 02:58:10 PM
my wife gives the Father Robby and Thomas FabIo Mysteries an uncompromised thumbs-up
Title: Re: Phoenix Dark, I have just begun working on your story/screenplay
Post by: TVC15 on December 08, 2007, 03:08:21 PM
my wife gives the Father Robby and Thomas FabIo Mysteries an uncompromised thumbs-up

Well, this one is going to be my grand epic.  It's going to be like Children of Men meets Blade Runner (no narration, fegs) meets the Warriors meets Sophie's Choice meets Boys in the Hood meets an overpass.  It is so totally an issue movie.
Title: Re: Phoenix Dark, I have just begun working on your story/screenplay
Post by: FlameOfCallandor on December 08, 2007, 03:09:27 PM
 :lol :lol :lol :lol
Title: Re: Phoenix Dark, I have just begun working on your story/screenplay
Post by: Phoenix Dark on December 08, 2007, 03:23:15 PM
Do I get laid in it? Hopefully the chick is hotter than the fat chick all over me last night
Title: Re: Phoenix Dark, I have just begun working on your story/screenplay
Post by: TVC15 on December 08, 2007, 03:25:41 PM
There is romance, and not in a creepy or gross or disgusting way.  But real romance.  Circa 2009.
Title: Re: Phoenix Dark, I have just begun working on your story/screenplay
Post by: FlameOfCallandor on December 08, 2007, 03:32:41 PM
There is romance, and not in a creepy or gross or disgusting way.  But real romance.  Circa 2009.

Is synbios in it?
Title: Re: Phoenix Dark, I have just begun working on your story/screenplay
Post by: TVC15 on December 08, 2007, 03:36:58 PM
There is romance, and not in a creepy or gross or disgusting way.  But real romance.  Circa 2009.

Is synbios in it?

I was toying with putting him in one of these, but I've put aside the idea every time it's come up, because I think if anyone deserves one to himself, it's synbios.
Title: Re: Phoenix Dark, I have just begun working on your story/screenplay
Post by: FlameOfCallandor on December 08, 2007, 03:43:36 PM
Synbois should be a batman villain. A misunderstood public outcast who plans to kill batman.
Title: Re: Phoenix Dark, I have just begun working on your story/screenplay
Post by: Phoenix Dark on December 08, 2007, 03:53:18 PM
my lover's name should be amanda
Title: Re: Phoenix Dark, I have just begun working on your story/screenplay
Post by: TVC15 on December 08, 2007, 03:56:11 PM
Synbois should be a batman villain. A misunderstood public outcast who plans to kill batman.

My first instinct was to set a synbios story in some sort of traveling carnival, either in the late 19th century, or possibly during the Great Depression.  I mean, I ain't racist or anything, but Holmes was built for freakshows, you know?

I've been bouncing around another idea, loosely ripped from Mr. Arkadin, which is cool, because nobody knows shit about Arkadin.  However, I am not sure how entertaining it would be, and I am also focused on Maurice's Rainbow right now.
Title: Re: Phoenix Dark, I have just begun working on your story/screenplay
Post by: Madrun Badrun on December 08, 2007, 04:03:25 PM
Will it have a rainbow party in it? where PD wheres all the lipstick???
Title: Re: Phoenix Dark, I have just begun working on your story/screenplay
Post by: Smooth Groove on December 08, 2007, 04:08:01 PM
Sounds good.  Just try to include a lot of BBC sluts. 
Title: Re: Phoenix Dark, I have just begun working on your story/screenplay
Post by: TVC15 on December 08, 2007, 06:06:56 PM
Synbios could be worked into a Hunger Artist style short story fairly easily.

I'm more of an In the Penal Colony kind of guy, but I can see Hunger Artist working better.  I mean, nobody could feasibly believe that Doktor von Flippers could operate and maintain an elaborate execution device, right?
Title: Re: Phoenix Dark, I have just begun working on your story/screenplay
Post by: Ichirou on December 08, 2007, 06:10:15 PM
Will Cheebs feature prominently in the story?
Title: Re: Phoenix Dark, I have just begun working on your story/screenplay
Post by: TVC15 on December 08, 2007, 06:14:33 PM
Will Cheebs feature prominently in the story?

Hmmmm, I figured Cheebs might be a candidate for his own story, but I can't really think of anything that fits him, offhand.  Maybe he will appear in Maurice's Rainbow, but I feel like it's not really a fair use, and it might not exactly fit in due to the rules and structure of the near future I have constructed.
Title: Re: Phoenix Dark, I have just begun working on your story/screenplay
Post by: Ichirou on December 08, 2007, 06:16:14 PM
I wrote some porn stories with PD and Cheebs.  They were pretty hot.
Title: Re: Phoenix Dark, I have just begun working on your story/screenplay
Post by: Gay Boy on December 08, 2007, 06:43:17 PM
I could never sleep with PD in real life. His lack of emotions would make it too hard to do! Dude, PD learn to SMILE sometimes. Its creepy how monotone he is.  :-\
Title: Re: Phoenix Dark, I have just begun working on your story/screenplay
Post by: TVC15 on December 08, 2007, 06:53:51 PM
I am sure Pdiddy could do better than a dude with hair resembling this:

(http://www.dollbox.com/usrimage/cat_logo.jpg)
Title: Re: Phoenix Dark, I have just begun working on your story/screenplay
Post by: Phoenix Dark on December 08, 2007, 07:20:30 PM
 :lol

Last time we met I smiled at bit!
Title: Re: Phoenix Dark, I have just begun working on your story/screenplay
Post by: Gay Boy on December 08, 2007, 09:39:20 PM
:lol

Last time we met I smiled at bit!
I remember you said Happy Holidays as you left, who says that to non-old people/strangers? It was weird, it made me laugh.
Title: Re: Phoenix Dark, I have just begun working on your story/screenplay
Post by: Ichirou on December 08, 2007, 09:41:11 PM
I could never sleep with PD in real life. His lack of emotions would make it too hard to do! Dude, PD learn to SMILE sometimes. Its creepy how monotone he is.  :-\

You wouldn't be seeing his face as he rides you from behind, so what do you care if he's smiling or frowning? :hump
Title: Re: Phoenix Dark, I have just begun working on your story/screenplay
Post by: Himu on December 08, 2007, 09:58:23 PM
tvc is such a sweet heart
Title: Re: Phoenix Dark, I have just begun working on your story/screenplay
Post by: Gay Boy on December 08, 2007, 10:08:51 PM
I offered PD to come with me into the library at school and find an empty room and I'll take a bunch of pictures of him.


He accepted.  :o
Title: Re: Phoenix Dark, I have just begun working on your story/screenplay
Post by: Himu on December 08, 2007, 10:09:45 PM
i miss PD
Title: Re: Phoenix Dark, I have just begun working on your story/screenplay
Post by: Ichirou on December 08, 2007, 10:10:27 PM
I offered PD to come with me into the library at school and find an empty room and I'll take a bunch of pictures of him.


He accepted.  :o

omg nudes?
Title: Re: Phoenix Dark, I have just begun working on your story/screenplay
Post by: Gay Boy on December 08, 2007, 10:11:30 PM
He told me he wants "good lighting" and to make sure its a room no one would accidently open up and find us.
Title: Re: Phoenix Dark, I have just begun working on your story/screenplay
Post by: Ichirou on December 08, 2007, 10:12:08 PM
:rofl
Title: Re: Phoenix Dark, I have just begun working on your story/screenplay
Post by: Himu on December 08, 2007, 10:12:32 PM
pd where are you :(
Title: Re: Phoenix Dark, I have just begun working on your story/screenplay
Post by: Gay Boy on December 08, 2007, 10:14:26 PM
I've been trying to find him all day but he is a sly motherfucker
Title: Re: Phoenix Dark, I have just begun working on your story/screenplay
Post by: Flannel Boy on December 08, 2007, 10:15:08 PM


Hot Black Male Students who like fucking and sucking to improve their grades... school fantasies cum true on BLACKBOOKWORMBITCHES.com
Title: Re: Phoenix Dark, I have just begun working on your story/screenplay
Post by: Himu on December 08, 2007, 10:20:53 PM
THAT URL IS FAKE
Title: Re: Phoenix Dark, I have just begun working on your story/screenplay
Post by: Ichirou on December 08, 2007, 10:22:20 PM
Himu, did you want to apply for a position on BLACKBOOKWORMBITCHES.com?
Title: Re: Phoenix Dark, I have just begun working on your story/screenplay
Post by: Phoenix Dark on December 09, 2007, 12:55:14 AM
I've been eating chinese food while watching Gladiator, Antwoine Fisher, 24, and The Matrix :bow

Cheebs is going to use a good cam to get some decent pics of me, hopefully on Thursday. No gay stuff, trust me
Title: Re: Phoenix Dark, I have just begun working on your story/screenplay
Post by: Himu on December 09, 2007, 01:14:42 AM
Himu, did you want to apply for a position on BLACKBOOKWORMBITCHES.com?

I LOVE women with glasses so YES
Title: Re: Phoenix Dark, I have just begun working on your story/screenplay
Post by: Phoenix Dark on December 09, 2007, 01:17:30 AM
Himu, did you want to apply for a position on BLACKBOOKWORMBITCHES.com?

I LOVE women with glasses so YES

Aw man, you would have loved this one video I had.  :lol
spoiler (click to show/hide)
Basically this chick dressed as a secretary gets pounded by Mandingo, and he's face fucking her so hard his dick accidentally comes out her mouth and breaks her glasses. Then she sticks the broken frame in her pussy
[close]
Title: Re: Phoenix Dark, I have just begun working on your story/screenplay
Post by: Ichirou on December 09, 2007, 01:18:55 AM


Hot Black Male Students who like fucking and sucking to improve their grades... school fantasies cum true on BLACKBOOKWORMBITCHES.com

I think you missed this part lol
Title: Re: Phoenix Dark, I have just begun working on your story/screenplay
Post by: Himu on December 09, 2007, 01:19:18 AM
OH FUCK!!!