Author Topic: Phoenix Dark, I have just begun working on your story/screenplay  (Read 2408 times)

0 Members and 1 Guest are viewing this topic.

TVC15

  • Laugh when you can, it’s cheap medicine -LB
  • Senior Member
Phoenix Dark, I have just begun working on your story/screenplay
« on: December 08, 2007, 02:25:29 PM »
This one is a doozie.  The working title, as of right now, is:

Maurice's Rainbow, or An Uncompromising Vision of What It Means to Be a Black Man in the Future of America, Year of Our Lord 2009, Under the Reign of Ron Paul, Rex Mundi, Rex Mundi

I am spittin' HOT FIYAH.  It is a NEAR FUTURE UTOPIA OR DYSTOPIA (depending on how racist or Texan you are).
« Last Edit: December 08, 2007, 02:30:36 PM by TVC 15 »
serge

Van Cruncheon

  • live mas or die trying
  • Banned
Re: Phoenix Dark, I have just begun working on your story/screenplay
« Reply #1 on: December 08, 2007, 02:58:10 PM »
my wife gives the Father Robby and Thomas FabIo Mysteries an uncompromised thumbs-up
duc

TVC15

  • Laugh when you can, it’s cheap medicine -LB
  • Senior Member
Re: Phoenix Dark, I have just begun working on your story/screenplay
« Reply #2 on: December 08, 2007, 03:08:21 PM »
my wife gives the Father Robby and Thomas FabIo Mysteries an uncompromised thumbs-up

Well, this one is going to be my grand epic.  It's going to be like Children of Men meets Blade Runner (no narration, fegs) meets the Warriors meets Sophie's Choice meets Boys in the Hood meets an overpass.  It is so totally an issue movie.
serge

FlameOfCallandor

  • The Walking Dead
Re: Phoenix Dark, I have just begun working on your story/screenplay
« Reply #3 on: December 08, 2007, 03:09:27 PM »
 :lol :lol :lol :lol

Phoenix Dark

  • I got no game it's just some bitches understand my story
  • Senior Member
Re: Phoenix Dark, I have just begun working on your story/screenplay
« Reply #4 on: December 08, 2007, 03:23:15 PM »
Do I get laid in it? Hopefully the chick is hotter than the fat chick all over me last night
010

TVC15

  • Laugh when you can, it’s cheap medicine -LB
  • Senior Member
Re: Phoenix Dark, I have just begun working on your story/screenplay
« Reply #5 on: December 08, 2007, 03:25:41 PM »
There is romance, and not in a creepy or gross or disgusting way.  But real romance.  Circa 2009.
serge

FlameOfCallandor

  • The Walking Dead
Re: Phoenix Dark, I have just begun working on your story/screenplay
« Reply #6 on: December 08, 2007, 03:32:41 PM »
There is romance, and not in a creepy or gross or disgusting way.  But real romance.  Circa 2009.

Is synbios in it?

TVC15

  • Laugh when you can, it’s cheap medicine -LB
  • Senior Member
Re: Phoenix Dark, I have just begun working on your story/screenplay
« Reply #7 on: December 08, 2007, 03:36:58 PM »
There is romance, and not in a creepy or gross or disgusting way.  But real romance.  Circa 2009.

Is synbios in it?

I was toying with putting him in one of these, but I've put aside the idea every time it's come up, because I think if anyone deserves one to himself, it's synbios.
serge

FlameOfCallandor

  • The Walking Dead
Re: Phoenix Dark, I have just begun working on your story/screenplay
« Reply #8 on: December 08, 2007, 03:43:36 PM »
Synbois should be a batman villain. A misunderstood public outcast who plans to kill batman.

Phoenix Dark

  • I got no game it's just some bitches understand my story
  • Senior Member
Re: Phoenix Dark, I have just begun working on your story/screenplay
« Reply #9 on: December 08, 2007, 03:53:18 PM »
my lover's name should be amanda
010

TVC15

  • Laugh when you can, it’s cheap medicine -LB
  • Senior Member
Re: Phoenix Dark, I have just begun working on your story/screenplay
« Reply #10 on: December 08, 2007, 03:56:11 PM »
Synbois should be a batman villain. A misunderstood public outcast who plans to kill batman.

My first instinct was to set a synbios story in some sort of traveling carnival, either in the late 19th century, or possibly during the Great Depression.  I mean, I ain't racist or anything, but Holmes was built for freakshows, you know?

I've been bouncing around another idea, loosely ripped from Mr. Arkadin, which is cool, because nobody knows shit about Arkadin.  However, I am not sure how entertaining it would be, and I am also focused on Maurice's Rainbow right now.
serge

Madrun Badrun

  • twin-anused mascot
  • Senior Member
Re: Phoenix Dark, I have just begun working on your story/screenplay
« Reply #11 on: December 08, 2007, 04:03:25 PM »
Will it have a rainbow party in it? where PD wheres all the lipstick???

Smooth Groove

  • Both teams played hard, my man
  • Senior Member
Re: Phoenix Dark, I have just begun working on your story/screenplay
« Reply #12 on: December 08, 2007, 04:08:01 PM »
Sounds good.  Just try to include a lot of BBC sluts. 

TVC15

  • Laugh when you can, it’s cheap medicine -LB
  • Senior Member
Re: Phoenix Dark, I have just begun working on your story/screenplay
« Reply #13 on: December 08, 2007, 06:06:56 PM »
Synbios could be worked into a Hunger Artist style short story fairly easily.

I'm more of an In the Penal Colony kind of guy, but I can see Hunger Artist working better.  I mean, nobody could feasibly believe that Doktor von Flippers could operate and maintain an elaborate execution device, right?
serge

Ichirou

  • Merry Christmas
  • Senior Member
Re: Phoenix Dark, I have just begun working on your story/screenplay
« Reply #14 on: December 08, 2007, 06:10:15 PM »
Will Cheebs feature prominently in the story?
PS4

TVC15

  • Laugh when you can, it’s cheap medicine -LB
  • Senior Member
Re: Phoenix Dark, I have just begun working on your story/screenplay
« Reply #15 on: December 08, 2007, 06:14:33 PM »
Will Cheebs feature prominently in the story?

Hmmmm, I figured Cheebs might be a candidate for his own story, but I can't really think of anything that fits him, offhand.  Maybe he will appear in Maurice's Rainbow, but I feel like it's not really a fair use, and it might not exactly fit in due to the rules and structure of the near future I have constructed.
serge

Ichirou

  • Merry Christmas
  • Senior Member
Re: Phoenix Dark, I have just begun working on your story/screenplay
« Reply #16 on: December 08, 2007, 06:16:14 PM »
I wrote some porn stories with PD and Cheebs.  They were pretty hot.
PS4

Gay Boy

  • McAmnesty
  • Senior Member
Re: Phoenix Dark, I have just begun working on your story/screenplay
« Reply #17 on: December 08, 2007, 06:43:17 PM »
I could never sleep with PD in real life. His lack of emotions would make it too hard to do! Dude, PD learn to SMILE sometimes. Its creepy how monotone he is.  :-\
hib

TVC15

  • Laugh when you can, it’s cheap medicine -LB
  • Senior Member
Re: Phoenix Dark, I have just begun working on your story/screenplay
« Reply #18 on: December 08, 2007, 06:53:51 PM »
I am sure Pdiddy could do better than a dude with hair resembling this:

serge

Phoenix Dark

  • I got no game it's just some bitches understand my story
  • Senior Member
Re: Phoenix Dark, I have just begun working on your story/screenplay
« Reply #19 on: December 08, 2007, 07:20:30 PM »
 :lol

Last time we met I smiled at bit!
010

Gay Boy

  • McAmnesty
  • Senior Member
Re: Phoenix Dark, I have just begun working on your story/screenplay
« Reply #20 on: December 08, 2007, 09:39:20 PM »
:lol

Last time we met I smiled at bit!
I remember you said Happy Holidays as you left, who says that to non-old people/strangers? It was weird, it made me laugh.
hib

Ichirou

  • Merry Christmas
  • Senior Member
Re: Phoenix Dark, I have just begun working on your story/screenplay
« Reply #21 on: December 08, 2007, 09:41:11 PM »
I could never sleep with PD in real life. His lack of emotions would make it too hard to do! Dude, PD learn to SMILE sometimes. Its creepy how monotone he is.  :-\

You wouldn't be seeing his face as he rides you from behind, so what do you care if he's smiling or frowning? :hump
PS4

Himu

  • Senior Member
Re: Phoenix Dark, I have just begun working on your story/screenplay
« Reply #22 on: December 08, 2007, 09:58:23 PM »
tvc is such a sweet heart
IYKYK

Gay Boy

  • McAmnesty
  • Senior Member
Re: Phoenix Dark, I have just begun working on your story/screenplay
« Reply #23 on: December 08, 2007, 10:08:51 PM »
I offered PD to come with me into the library at school and find an empty room and I'll take a bunch of pictures of him.


He accepted.  :o
hib

Himu

  • Senior Member
Re: Phoenix Dark, I have just begun working on your story/screenplay
« Reply #24 on: December 08, 2007, 10:09:45 PM »
i miss PD
IYKYK

Ichirou

  • Merry Christmas
  • Senior Member
Re: Phoenix Dark, I have just begun working on your story/screenplay
« Reply #25 on: December 08, 2007, 10:10:27 PM »
I offered PD to come with me into the library at school and find an empty room and I'll take a bunch of pictures of him.


He accepted.  :o

omg nudes?
PS4

Gay Boy

  • McAmnesty
  • Senior Member
Re: Phoenix Dark, I have just begun working on your story/screenplay
« Reply #26 on: December 08, 2007, 10:11:30 PM »
He told me he wants "good lighting" and to make sure its a room no one would accidently open up and find us.
hib

Ichirou

  • Merry Christmas
  • Senior Member
Re: Phoenix Dark, I have just begun working on your story/screenplay
« Reply #27 on: December 08, 2007, 10:12:08 PM »
:rofl
PS4

Himu

  • Senior Member
Re: Phoenix Dark, I have just begun working on your story/screenplay
« Reply #28 on: December 08, 2007, 10:12:32 PM »
pd where are you :(
IYKYK

Gay Boy

  • McAmnesty
  • Senior Member
Re: Phoenix Dark, I have just begun working on your story/screenplay
« Reply #29 on: December 08, 2007, 10:14:26 PM »
I've been trying to find him all day but he is a sly motherfucker
hib

Flannel Boy

  • classic millennial sex pickle
  • Icon
Re: Phoenix Dark, I have just begun working on your story/screenplay
« Reply #30 on: December 08, 2007, 10:15:08 PM »


Hot Black Male Students who like fucking and sucking to improve their grades... school fantasies cum true on BLACKBOOKWORMBITCHES.com

Himu

  • Senior Member
Re: Phoenix Dark, I have just begun working on your story/screenplay
« Reply #31 on: December 08, 2007, 10:20:53 PM »
THAT URL IS FAKE
IYKYK

Ichirou

  • Merry Christmas
  • Senior Member
Re: Phoenix Dark, I have just begun working on your story/screenplay
« Reply #32 on: December 08, 2007, 10:22:20 PM »
Himu, did you want to apply for a position on BLACKBOOKWORMBITCHES.com?
PS4

Phoenix Dark

  • I got no game it's just some bitches understand my story
  • Senior Member
Re: Phoenix Dark, I have just begun working on your story/screenplay
« Reply #33 on: December 09, 2007, 12:55:14 AM »
I've been eating chinese food while watching Gladiator, Antwoine Fisher, 24, and The Matrix :bow

Cheebs is going to use a good cam to get some decent pics of me, hopefully on Thursday. No gay stuff, trust me
010

Himu

  • Senior Member
Re: Phoenix Dark, I have just begun working on your story/screenplay
« Reply #34 on: December 09, 2007, 01:14:42 AM »
Himu, did you want to apply for a position on BLACKBOOKWORMBITCHES.com?

I LOVE women with glasses so YES
IYKYK

Phoenix Dark

  • I got no game it's just some bitches understand my story
  • Senior Member
Re: Phoenix Dark, I have just begun working on your story/screenplay
« Reply #35 on: December 09, 2007, 01:17:30 AM »
Himu, did you want to apply for a position on BLACKBOOKWORMBITCHES.com?

I LOVE women with glasses so YES

Aw man, you would have loved this one video I had.  :lol
spoiler (click to show/hide)
Basically this chick dressed as a secretary gets pounded by Mandingo, and he's face fucking her so hard his dick accidentally comes out her mouth and breaks her glasses. Then she sticks the broken frame in her pussy
[close]
010

Ichirou

  • Merry Christmas
  • Senior Member
Re: Phoenix Dark, I have just begun working on your story/screenplay
« Reply #36 on: December 09, 2007, 01:18:55 AM »


Hot Black Male Students who like fucking and sucking to improve their grades... school fantasies cum true on BLACKBOOKWORMBITCHES.com

I think you missed this part lol
PS4

Himu

  • Senior Member
Re: Phoenix Dark, I have just begun working on your story/screenplay
« Reply #37 on: December 09, 2007, 01:19:18 AM »
OH FUCK!!!
IYKYK