Author Topic: My first attempt at satire... (Read 861 times)

ferrarimanf355 · « **on:** August 06, 2007, 10:10:17 AM »

I had this idea poking around my head for a week, and I put it up in my blog last night.
http://ferrarimanf355.1up.com/do/blogEntry?bId=8307059&publicUserId=5524352
It's my first attempt at a satire, so any critiques would be nice.

Madrun Badrun · « **Reply #1 on:** August 06, 2007, 04:54:21 PM »

I thought satires should have a sense of subtleness.

TVC15 · « **Reply #2 on:** August 06, 2007, 04:56:25 PM »

That was more awful than The Turner Diaries.

Van Cruncheon · « **Reply #3 on:** August 06, 2007, 04:58:14 PM »

the best part is when he puts SATIRE in the title -- it's like he's satirizing satires! that was what he intended, right?

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Himu · « **Reply #4 on:** August 06, 2007, 04:58:21 PM »

isn't one of the points of being a satire not telling your audience it's a satire?

Robo · « **Reply #5 on:** August 06, 2007, 05:00:54 PM »

As if it really needed to be suggested, you should dig around on The Onion until you wrap your head around how editorial satire should work.

Smooth Groove · « **Reply #6 on:** August 06, 2007, 05:19:36 PM »

It was really good. Did you study English Literature at Harvard?

Madrun Badrun · « **Reply #7 on:** August 06, 2007, 05:20:40 PM »

It was really good. Did you study English Literature at Harvard?

now that I found funny.

TakingBackSunday · « **Reply #8 on:** August 06, 2007, 05:47:40 PM »

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