Himu presents: Jungle Snatch the drawing (nsfw)

[tiesto]

I'm at work now but I'll be giving my opinion when I get home later...

[Olivia Wilde Homo]

I was in Graphic Design for a year so might I make a critique?

- The face looks like it has no depth.  It looks like she is wearing a mask made from a paper plate.  Exaggerated shadowing underneath the cheekbones are grossly unrealistic.  If you must shadow, shadow along where you think will be the cheekbone lines.  You could have found this on any touched up Maxim picture.

- The vagina looks like when she stands up, it will hang only about 3-4 inches from the surface.

- Nice tits.  It is clear that you spent most of your focus on them and it paid off handsomely.

- Extremely sharp edges.  Even if you like pointy things, you can't have something soft and well drawn in the middle.  It looks lazy and laziness is not an admirable style, unless you are an abstract artist.  If you want it sharp, do it all that way.

Just some friendly pointers.

[Joe Molotov]

Based on expectations, which were very low, I'd give this a B. Tits were nice, face was awful, but that's alright because with that big ol' booty, I'd be going back-door anyway.

So does he get the Scarface DVD?

[tiesto]

The first thing I noticed about the drawing were the proportions... the hips were a bit too thick for my tastes, even if the curvature of the rest of her body was clearly defined. Boobs looked nice, with good perky nipples. The face wasn't really my thing, but the hair came out really well. I liked the full lips and the eyes, but the nose was a bit too wide for my aesthetic taste.

The bush was nice but could have used a bit more texture. I'm gonna give you a B for effort.

[Mupepe]

and laziness is not an admirable style, unless you are an abstract artist.