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- I thought that book had a very rough start and it wasn't until halfway in before I realized exactly why. The reason why it sounds boring and derivative is because that is the impression Amy and Nick want to give. The second section of the book shows that it was all bullshit and that nothing was what it had seemed. Things unravel pretty fast and move pretty quickly. This part of the book drew me in quickly.
- Amy having her bankroll taken caused me to laugh. She thought she had snowed the local rubes who wound up playing her ass. The book kind of took a backslide here that never completely recovers. It was a little too convenient that she got whisked away by her lover/stalker/kidnapper in some luxurious lake house where he just so happened to have tulips (Amy's favorite flower) and other little things. The details on how she escapes aren't really touched on much and seems to skip over a lot of convenient coincidences that would be crucial to the story.
- The ending wasn't bad. Now Nick and Amy are plotting ways to fuck each other over but without any easy solution in sight to do so.
If I had to rate this book, I'd give it a solid B. Some very good writing, some twists and turns that kept things interesting for a good portion of the book, but it falls apart in places. The ending is also kind of awkward. Personally, whenever I had to do creative writing, I always had troubles trying to write a good ending. I can kind of see a similar problem here.