New Poem: I see you

[futami]

wiping away the greying mist

i determinedly peered ahead

towards two prying brown eyes

staring back with sullen dread

at a dull and rough facade

behind which now meekly hides

a once close friend of ours

I convinced myself had died

That dark and shameful piece of me

i left years back to rot

when a fresh identity

a new reflection

was all i really sought

but he still lives

neither close nor very far

with a mocking tone, he whispers one question

"Do you now know who you are?"
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thoughts?....thnx

[Flannel Boy]

wiping away the greying cum

i determinedly peered ahead

towards one prying brown eye

staring back with sullen dread

[bagofeyes]

Pretty shit

[Vizzys]

Who did you steal this one from?

[futami]

Who did you steal this one from?

why would you assume i stole it from anyone?

[Van Cruncheon]

that's viz' eskimo way of saying black people only steal things

[Vizzys]

that's viz' eskimo way of saying black people only steal things

Everyone knows I'm a racist.

[Flannel Boy]

Futami pays for his jeans! 

[Van Cruncheon]

Viz: the "racist" epithet we've given you doesn't bear repeating, but the "kinda dumb" one needs more air time

EDITED FOR MALEK'S READING COMPREHENSION

[Flannel Boy]

the racist epithet doesn't bear repeating, but the "kinda dumb" one needs more air time

[Diablos]

wiping away the greying mist

i determinedly peered ahead

towards two prying brown eyes

staring back with sullen dread

at a dull and rough facade

behind which now meekly hides

a once close friend of ours

I convinced myself had died

That dark and shameful piece of me

i left years back to rot

when a fresh identity

a new reflection

was all i really sought

but he still lives

neither close nor very far

with a mocking tone, he whispers one question

"Do you now know who you are?"
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thoughts?....thnx

Brother, you should write that on one of the missles you fantasize about sending over to the middle east.

















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 :hehe :hehe

[Diablos]

roses are red
violets are blue
PS3 costs $600,
and futami's jeans, too!

[futami]

roses are red
violets are blue
PS3 costs 6 jews,
and futami's jeans do, too!

fixed

[Diablos]

nicca plz

[futami]

nicca plz

aren't you a virgin?

[Human Snorenado]

Dark and lonely on a summer's night.

Kill my landlord. Kill my landlord.

Watchdog barking. Do he bite?

Kill my landlord. Kill my landlord.

Slip in his window. Break his neck.

Then his house I start to wreck.

Got no reason. What the heck?

Kill my landlord. Kill my landlord.

C-I-L my land lord!

[APF]

"6 jews?"  That's pretty awful, Diablos.

[Diablos]

He changed my words.

[futami]

updated..

wiping away the greying mist

I determinedly peered ahead

towards two prying eyes

staring back with sullen dread

at a damp facade

behind which meekly hides

a once close friend of ours

I convinced myself had died

That dark and shameful piece of me

I left years back to rot

when a fresh identity

a new reflection

was all I really sought

but he still lives

neither close nor very far

whispering just one question

"Do you now know who you are?"

[APF]

"determinedly" is an awkward word choice.

[futami]

"determinedly" is an awkward word choice.

i know. been thinking of something to replace, a word which denotes the intensity of a determined stare....at the moment, i can't think of anything.