Author Topic: how do you guys like my graphic design mid term project (2001: ASO collage) (Read 1997 times)

Himu · « **on:** March 01, 2007, 04:50:26 PM »

sucks it's not wallpaper size but I'll try to make it fix wallpaper dimensions at least. I made part of the image reflectl the acid trip landing on Jupiter.

I like it I guess. It took me 30 minutes to do so I can't complain. Give suggestions! I'm edging Hal's eye now so it's not so grungey.

There it goes! Wallpaper size!

The Miles Trahan Burger Experiment · « **Reply #1 on:** March 01, 2007, 04:56:34 PM »

It's alright. :-/

The Fake Shemp · « **Reply #2 on:** March 01, 2007, 04:58:16 PM »

The blending is pretty good save for the planet on the right - you can easily see the borders and the lines really stick out. Looks pretty ugh.

In terms of design, I'm not really a fan. It kind of looks like Galactus' vomit.

TVC15 · « **Reply #3 on:** March 01, 2007, 04:59:42 PM »

You traced it.

The Miles Trahan Burger Experiment · « **Reply #4 on:** March 01, 2007, 05:00:52 PM »

IMO, alot of the for/mid-ground objects look like they were jsut pasted on top. The background and HAL's eye are pretty cool, though.

Oh, and for once I agree with Willco. The design is kinda bleh.

Vizzys · « **Reply #5 on:** March 01, 2007, 05:01:12 PM »

its wierd.

makaveli · « **Reply #6 on:** March 01, 2007, 05:01:28 PM »

and you guys wonder why you have no friends

Himu · « **Reply #7 on:** March 01, 2007, 05:03:51 PM »

I'm really lazy. I don't feel like putting the 4-5 hours into a project. Snore.

The Miles Trahan Burger Experiment · « **Reply #8 on:** March 01, 2007, 05:05:14 PM »

Quote from: Himuro on March 01, 2007, 05:03:51 PM

I'm really lazy. I don't feel like putting the 4-5 hours into a project. Snore.

How many hours did this take?

Himu · « **Reply #9 on:** March 01, 2007, 05:06:32 PM »

30 minutes.

TVC15 · « **Reply #10 on:** March 01, 2007, 05:07:26 PM »

It totally looks like a Yes album cover.

Himu · « **Reply #11 on:** March 01, 2007, 05:08:21 PM »

Quote from: makaveli on March 01, 2007, 05:01:28 PM

and you guys wonder why you have no friends

Are you fucking stupid?

TVC15 · « **Reply #12 on:** March 01, 2007, 05:09:55 PM »

The Miles Trahan Burger Experiment · « **Reply #13 on:** March 01, 2007, 05:10:20 PM »

Quote from: Himuro on March 01, 2007, 05:08:21 PM

Quote from: makaveli on March 01, 2007, 05:01:28 PM
and you guys wonder why you have no friends

Are you fucking stupid?

Are YOU? Look who you're talking to.

Himu · « **Reply #14 on:** March 01, 2007, 05:11:23 PM »

Dude I know, but like, does he really think that because I'm doing a school project I have no friends? I mean. What does that have to do with anything? I thought he was smarter than a BABY at least.

APF · « **Reply #15 on:** March 01, 2007, 05:13:30 PM »

Yes album covers remind me of Shadow of the Beast

Himu · « **Reply #16 on:** March 01, 2007, 05:23:37 PM »

Edited some more:

Robo · « **Reply #17 on:** March 01, 2007, 05:25:30 PM »

It looks like one of those solar system air-brush paintings those old hippies in the mall make.

Newly edited version looks much better.

Vizzys · « **Reply #18 on:** March 01, 2007, 05:27:08 PM »

agreed, much better.

Himu · « **Reply #19 on:** March 01, 2007, 05:31:00 PM »

I forgot that I have to put in a colored black and white pic. Shit. Hmmm. What to do..

These are my sources:

spoiler (click to show/hide)

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Robo · « **Reply #20 on:** March 01, 2007, 05:38:57 PM »

Colorizing the ship would be your best bet unless you want to add something else.

Maybe you could put one of the other astronaut's corpses floating out in space and colorize it.

Himu · « **Reply #21 on:** March 01, 2007, 05:40:19 PM »

I could give it a try.

Phoenix Dark · « **Reply #22 on:** March 01, 2007, 06:32:50 PM »

Quote from: makaveli on March 01, 2007, 05:01:28 PM

and you guys wonder why you have no friends

Shut the fuck up. I'll be damned before I watch you make fun of anybody, especially Himu

Himu I like it although the colors are too dark

Himu · « **Reply #23 on:** March 01, 2007, 06:33:32 PM »

Quote from: Phoenix Dark on March 01, 2007, 06:32:50 PM

Quote from: makaveli on March 01, 2007, 05:01:28 PM
and you guys wonder why you have no friends

Shut the fuck up. I'll be damned before I watch you make fun of anybody, especially Himu

awwwwww

CrystalGemini · « **Reply #24 on:** March 01, 2007, 11:54:32 PM »

Quote from: Himuro on March 01, 2007, 05:23:37 PM

Edited some more:

(Image removed from quote.)

You need to adjust the balance in your image. When I look at the picture my eye is automatically drawn to the right half. Your use of oranges and blues is a good mix. The satellite to the right looks very flat and actually detracts from the overall image. Your text selection is fine as is, but it could be better. Right now it looks too much like text out of magazine articles instead of the space theme you're going for. Maybe something thinner with letters spaced farther apart? I do like how you used all caps though - it gives the title more impact. Also the title may look better without the white line above the title box. It grounds the overall feel - something you may not want in a space themed design.

I hope that helps. Good luck with your assignment.

Himu · « **Reply #25 on:** March 01, 2007, 11:55:30 PM »

When I look at it, my eye is automatically drawn to the eye in the center..

The font is that way because that's the typical 2001 font. Look at the sources I used.

Yeah, I think I could make the line a biiiit less opaque.

MrAngryFace · « **Reply #26 on:** March 01, 2007, 11:57:01 PM »

TRACER

Himu · « **Reply #27 on:** March 01, 2007, 11:57:45 PM »

Christopher · « **Reply #28 on:** March 02, 2007, 12:01:03 AM »

C at best.

Vizzys · « **Reply #29 on:** March 02, 2007, 12:16:59 AM »

Quote from: Christopher on March 02, 2007, 12:01:03 AM

C at best.

what do you give this:

http://evilbore.com/images/melissalol/sub4.jpg

Madrun Badrun · « **Reply #30 on:** March 02, 2007, 12:23:19 AM »

Quote from: Viz on March 02, 2007, 12:16:59 AM

Quote from: Christopher on March 02, 2007, 12:01:03 AM
C at best.

what do you give this:

http://evilbore.com/images/melissalol/sub4.jpg

ahahahah.

Himu, I liked HALs eye better in the first version. actally I liked the first version better. It felt passionate. That being said C at best is right, sorry buddy.

Himu · « **Reply #31 on:** March 02, 2007, 12:29:34 AM »

I'm not even done with it yet.

VALIS · « **Reply #32 on:** March 02, 2007, 01:32:26 AM »

'S pretty bitchin'. If you get the chance, can I get the original image in 1920x1200? Thanks.

xnikki118x · « **Reply #33 on:** March 02, 2007, 01:57:50 AM »

I dunno I like it haha.

Himu · « **Reply #34 on:** March 08, 2007, 05:36:07 PM »

Final version:

except the text is a little more centered

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Author Topic: how do you guys like my graphic design mid term project (2001: ASO collage) (Read 1997 times)